Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is
no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films, need to
be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both· these, views and give your own opinion.
some people think that now we ,watch movies on gadgets we do not need to attend movie
theatre. Some think that to be really liked movies must be seen in a movie theatre. In this essay I will discuss both the views and give my own opinion.
To see films on our tablets and phones there is no need to go to the cinema. On my tablet I see
every film I want to see. Also this way is cheap. Each month I pay £9 and I watch may films in my home or on train. If something happen I can stop and do it and later I can watch my film again. I like this and then fully enjoy is as my stress is not there.
In addition, I like to go to the cinema.I like my friends and me to meet up and 90 to cinema and if I see my boyfriend I like to go to cinema to see a film together. Last year on my birthday many
friends and me all went to cinema to gether and we watched Deep Water Horizon. I enjoyed this and my friends too, because the big screen showed more information and because the sound quality was better than at home. May be in my home we will not be so happy to watch this film and see the famous actor. Also, we enjoyed the popcorn and coke we could buy.
ln ,conclusion in my house l like to watch films on my tablet. lt is cheap and easy for me, but I also like to go to cinema to see films, especially with friends. Maybe both are good to fully enjoy films at different times and with different people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.88581314879 5.12529762239 76% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02236628678 2.80592935109 72% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501730103806 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8956618337 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0588235294 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288481535087 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10363024275 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920211712089 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168683963456 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826471319893 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 13.0946893788 41% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 50.2224549098 175% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.99 12.4159519038 40% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.23 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 10.7795591182 46% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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