Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter 1-give details of how you and your friend or family use the center 2-explain why the center is important for the local community 3-describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes
Dear Mr. Chris,
I am writing a letter to convey my disappointment about your attention to close the sports and leisure center due to budget constraints which are on the north side of the community.
I would like to put into your consideration that we, as well as, the rest of the family members in the community are using the above-mentioned center in order to rewind stress from a hectic routine of the day. This center provides a plethora of recreational activities including jogging tracks, video games, and badminton both for kids and families to spend their leisure time within the gated community. Therefore, I presume that this center is important for community members to spend healthy lives and get together to build a strong relationship. Besides, it will increase the property value of the community because people give preference to live in a place where recreational facilities would be available for residence.
Moreover, I have a doubt that the closure of the leisure center will create a negative impact on the local people who leads to negativity among residences as they won’t be able to share their grievances with each other. In addition, there are chances that people will look for another option to move out of the community because of the non-availability of recreational activities within the community.
I hope the information above would be helpful to revert your final decision, so we can enjoy the facilities, provided by the community’s management.
Best Regards,
Matt
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23481781377 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04357056842 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3798261103 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.666666667 76.5299724578 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212395111827 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769702637881 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725909765582 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129543014833 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790207000458 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 8.37731958763 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 70.7449484536 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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