You are organising a graduation party for your class and you want to book a restaurant.Write a letter to the manager of your favourite restaurant.In the letter: explain the reason for the party and the date and time it will be held describe some particular food you would like served say how many people will be attending and what their dietary requirements are
Dear sir bahrami,
I am from Iran and study at Oxford University in your country.I graduated from this university with a degree in genetics. I am writing a letter of request to you.restaurant and thank you for the excellent service and your delicious and fresh food.I want to have a graduation party at your restaurant on November 26th and Saturday, and invite 20 of my friends. It lasts from 8_11pm.I know that Saturday is a productive day for you. And I hope that all my wishes come true.
My friends have a special diet and I tend to have a special meal for each of them.A friend of mine is a vegetarian so I order her a vegetable salad.A few others are interested in seafood and I want to serve up some seafood models including shrimp, fish and crab.It is best to add a few other foods, such as chicken and steak to the menu.My fiancé and I prefer to try your Pepperoni pizza. In addition to these dishes, I would like to order a cake with our photo engraved on it, which is a surprise to my friends.
You know these parties are noisy and are accompanied by music. And I expect the restaurant environment to be ready for my friends' music and happiness.I want to make a great day for my friends and ask you to help me with this.Please send me the cost of these items to my email address smoradi1350@gmail.com .
In anticipation of a prompt reply to facilitate further, Thanking you
Your sinerely,
Daniali
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in addition, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58139534884 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83339288904 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.679976022 44.8134815571 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 76.5299724578 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 16.8248392259 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225492142873 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927984308865 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764486432105 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120748920565 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709272697317 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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