Newly moved and will be throwing a party. Letter to neighbours

Essay topics:

Newly moved and will be throwing a party. Letter to neighbours

Hello Paul,

Since you know I have recently moved next door it is my responsiblity to inform you that I will be hosting a party tomorrow. my friends are pretty demanding when it come to have fun especially when alcohol is involved. Need not to remind you that you are also invited to enjoy with us and will get know each other better. There will be loud music that might act as an interference if you want to sleep early. Please accept my apologies in advance.

parties are the best way to know your neighbours well, don't miss the opportunity to gelup with my friends, you will be jealous of my group. Almost forgot to tell that the mega event will be till midnight so better sort your busy schedule in advance.

waiting eagerly to have your presence at the venue on the 15th november starting 6pm onwards.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Paul, Since you know I have recently moved nex...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Hello Paul, Since you know I have recently moved next doo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...hat I will be hosting a party tomorrow. my friends are pretty demanding when it co...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...my friends are pretty demanding when it come to have fun especially when alcohol is ...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remind'?
Suggestion: remind
...ally when alcohol is involved. Need not to remind you that you are also invited to enjoy ...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Please accept my apologies in advance. parties are the best way to know your ne...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parties
... accept my apologies in advance. parties are the best way to know your neighbour...
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Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... best way to know your neighbours well, dont miss the opportunity to gelup with my f...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Waiting
...rt your busy schedule in advance. waiting eagerly to have your presence at the ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, mind you, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55405405405 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3399069113 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689189189189 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6339272703 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160513438383 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656666848683 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056960698543 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934265748099 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675885896327 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.