The provided bar chart depicts the data related to the status of young Americans over the 30 years period and the rate of married and divorced people of the USA in these years.
starting with the first graph, it is observed that the marriage rate was stable from 1970 to 1980 period with a number of 2.5 million. After this period from 1990 to 2000, it gradually decreased to 2 billion rates. However, in the same period of time, the divorce rate was 1 billion in 1970 then suddenly it reached a peak of almost1.5 billion till 1980. After that, the rate of divorcees fell back to 1 billion by the end of the period in 2000.
Moving towards the next graph, we can clearly see that 70% of American adults were married in 1970 which is the highest rate among all the categories than the rate took a downward trend till 2000 up to 60%. the rate of widowed adults was stable at about 5% throughout the period. while divorced rate goes upward from 2% to almost 9% in 2000. lastly, the rate of adults who were never married in the period of 1970 to 2000 went up from 12% to 20% almost.
overall, it can be concluded that the rate of married people is highest for adults in America for 30 years of period, while it goes in a downward trend in the US.
- the charts below show information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. 73
- The cart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of world.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...able at about 5% throughout the period. while divorced rate goes upward from 2% to al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30508474576 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09998563626 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0543157587 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266254145361 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115013392405 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525603586416 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159553233457 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752214945802 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.