The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the fluctuation of 20-24 year old unemployment graduates in a European country between 2008 and 2009 by gender. Overall, men’s unemployment rate changed more considerably than that of women over this two year period.
In 2008, after witnessing a slight decline in January, the graduate unemployment of male and female remained stable at approximately 7.5% and 6% respectively from April to July. These rates then increased suddenly and sharply in October to more than 15% for men and above 10% for women.
Move to the year 2009, although men’s graduate unemployment ...
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Despite a small fall in July 2009
Despite a small fall on July 2009
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