Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Write at least 250 words.
In this digital era, the internet has brought revolution in every domain whether it is education, business and so on, which has made people's lives both easier and tough. However, some people believe that the internet has resulted in manifold problems for people with some advantages. Here, I partially agree with the statement.
To begin with, the internet is one of the biggest inventions which has altered every aspect of human life and thus has brought multifarious benefits. Firstly, the internet has made it plausible for people to connect and interact with the people who are living even in remote areas, thereby narrowed the gap between humans. On top of that, the internet has facilitated various mediums by which import and export as well as doing business has become very smooth, which in turn helps raise the economy of any nation. For instance, it has been found that now students can get a good quality education without any cost owing to the Internet.
On the contrary, every situation is accompanied by certain drawbacks, which is similar in this case. The Internet has resulted in severe horrendous problems for the people. Firstly, the Internet is an umbrella where every kind of content is available without any constraint, and sometimes teenagers get access to such negative content, which is not pertinent for their holistic development. Besides this, nowadays, people have engrossed themselves utterly in the use of the internet on account of which they often get distracted from their goals, which later creates humongous predicaments for them.
In conclusion, I reckon that the internet has made almost every impossible work possible, and hence people should use it in an optimum way, rather than misusing it.
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| 2019-11-13 | kuldeep sharma | 83 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18996415771 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5712842969 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6909892278 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9166666667 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19558262874 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822272188608 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687882950601 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126364427939 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814302862023 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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