Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers while other disagrees. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
gift is a token of love to make someone happy. Many individuals postulate that the cash is the perfect present for youngsters, whereas opponents discord. however, I consummate accord with the former notion. Both the views along with my opinion will be explicated in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, some parents think cash is not an ideal gift for their child. If they give cash as a gift to their children then they would value the money as they have not earned this money by themselves or use money in inappropriate way. For example, to buy drugs which are very harmful for their health. Moreover, they buy and use these things without taking permission of their guardians. therefore, people do not prefer money as a gift for their child.
On the other hand, there is plethora of benefits of cash as a present. young people can buy anything of their choice. Sometimes, parents buy some eatable or cloth items from market to give as a gift to their childern and they do not like that thing and do not use these items. Therefore, some parents are confused in buying gifts for offspring and by giving money they do not have to rush to the market to buy present which they want to give to young ones. As well as, children can also use that amount for their future needs.
However, in my view cash is a good gift for children but it depends upon them in which way they are using and parents should teach their child that they should use this amount only in right way.
To conclude, there are more advantages of giving money as a present to youngsters then the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6013986014 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35592734656 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496503496503 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1564881538 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229119379706 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823373296971 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558555908897 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124600358135 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468817156675 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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