Solving environment problems for the present generation to sacrifice our present convenient way of living.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the contemporary era, there is a herd argument over the issue that environmental degradation.A lion's share of society favors it.Evidently,problems related to environmental degradation are rising day by day .some people argue that by compromising luxurious living style,we can solve this problems easily.However I believe that less usage of technology and need more responsible towards our surrounding,human can tackle this issues effectively.
To begin with,one of the most effective steps can be taken by making some changes in people daily life activities. Unknowingly, many of us get indulged in those actions which can be hazardous for our environment .For instance,using plastic materials although we are all aware that plastic bags are harmful for environment,people still use plastic bags.In addition,running some campaigns and spreading the information about harmful effects of using plastic bags and bottles can save earth.Furthermore,trees cut down for human needs,it is rising alarming level.As a result, global warming highly effective for our environment.In addition depletion of water is increasing in many parts of the world.By making some change in our habits,water related problems can be solved.
Furthermore,the advent of technology is adversely affecting our environment.Demand for the production is rising at alarming level.However limited use of technology and promoting more usage of natural resource such as solar,water and tidal energy can solve this problems.In my opinion ,the government and individual both should their best foot forward together in order to curb the menace.
To conclude,we could get the chance to lead this present lifestyle after struggling for many years.I believe that by considering some above mentioned steps we can save our earth for descendants without hampering our present life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93382352941 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61446050177 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.613146086 49.4020404114 376% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 322.8 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.4 20.7667163134 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.8 7.06120827912 323% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174610737986 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966793673666 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558946421458 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113265074027 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496207181399 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 50.2224549098 -0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.0 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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