Nowadays, the majority of people tend to visit large shopping centres and malls to do their shopping because of there are several options are available rather than the local shops. I certainly agree that the trend of shopping malls is a quite positive development of nation and side effects of local shops. This essay will discuss about large shopping malls of benefits and the drawbacks of this trend also.
To begin with shopping malls, People obtain less consuming time and transportation cost. In large shopping mall, several kind of products are available like clothes, foods and beverages, groceries, children toy’s and so on. Even, the competitor’s product are also available to compare the price and quality. In malls, People feel comfortable, safe and wider space to gives them pleasure. The Payment method options are numerous through cash, scan code, credit and debit card. In festival season, the malls give certain amount of discounts too in cheaper price. Nowadays, the cinema theatre is also available to watch the movie with family. Finally yet importantly, since you can find almost everything on your shopping list at large department malls.
Seeing the present circumstances, many local shops are closed due to people denied to visit there. It may have adverse effect on local shopkeepers like lack of fund to support their family, Affect to their children education and basic requirements on daily basis. Sometimes it leads to violence and crime due to lack of fund. For example, in western countries, People wanted to buy the products in largest shopping malls Because of mall facility is available everywhere.
To sum up, The shopping malls is not a bad idea to purchase the items because of the benefits are numerous and price is also reasonable, while People should buy some products from local shops also to maintain the balance between large malls and small local shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 403, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...enefits and the drawbacks of this trend also. To begin with shopping malls, Peopl...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...portation cost. In large shopping mall, several kind of products are available like clothes,...
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Line 3, column 652, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ilable to watch the movie with family. Finally yet importantly, since you can find alm...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied visiting'.
Suggestion: denied visiting
...ny local shops are closed due to people denied to visit there. It may have adverse effect on lo...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the largest'.
Suggestion: in the largest
...ries, People wanted to buy the products in largest shopping malls Because of mall facility...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, may, so, while, for example, kind of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16720257235 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58573685641 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572347266881 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5138869409 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338435794647 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101313310379 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908348750418 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223849931664 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935903682606 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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