The question raises a issue of youngsters's mount over the old population in some countries. I suppose that there are more benefits than drawback in this case. In this essay, I will state my opinion with relevant examples.
First of all, the countries which have young population will not worry about the labor source. Whereas, the countries which have old people more than young people have to rent foreigners for their companies. The youngsters who have work skillful are the best choice for workforce. As a consequence, their economic can develop well. A further reason is active adolescents can compete each other that make the economy increasing faster. In addition, it is easier for education that young adults have better acumen to learning. They can study different things with a intelligent brain. Therefore, the government will be helped a lots by the young generation. In the other words, young people can be quick to adapt with new changes which is very necessary nowadays. It is a point to see that youths are the most important capitals to development of a nation.
However, besides the advantages, young population still has some problems there. This is because there are relatively large number of young adults. Thus, the government has to pay a great sums of money for welfare such as education, health care, ... Next, youngsters have different behaviors and government cannot control all that make more criminals. Finally, they may get competitive psychologically and become pressure leading harm themselves.
To sum up, in this situation, the advantages get dominant proportion. Because lots of benefits from young generation that are beneficial to the society.
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the advantages get dominant proportion. Because lots of benefits from young generation ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, i suppose, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23616236162 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77830033411 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.3039735321 49.4020404114 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.95 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.55 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180174789884 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553708921214 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838718847827 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107960319843 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331396292316 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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