The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Crimes have become the integral part of the society. Some people argue that illegal activities in the present have decreased compared to the past because of sophisticated modern technology. Current essay will discuss this in detail along with my opinion.
On the one hand technologies like security cameras are helping the police to identify criminals which is why the crime rate has been decreased. Moreover, security cameras have been installed in almost all the organizations including banks, IT companies and so on. Furthermore, security alarms also play a crucial role in minimizing the robberies. According to the research conducted by the CBI (Central Bureau of Investigation), it was demonstrated that crime rate has been decreased to 40% after invention of security cameras. Therefore, this explains the view that technology is responsible for lesser crime rates in the present era.
On the other hand, criminals became more devious and creative than the past which is leading to more crime rates especially information technology crimes. Furthermore, cyber-crimes have become very popular in the recent times. For instance, robbing money through internet banking and through online credit card payments have increased several times because of advanced technology. As per the research study conducted by cyber control team, it was concluded that cyber-crime has increased to 70% after the release of latest software into the market. Although security cameras are installed, thief’s can escape imprisonments with innovative techniques.
In my opinion, clever criminals are deploying the technology to escape and perform IT crimes due to which the offenders have increased many folds compared to the olden days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 514, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63878326996 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89052920813 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8292237277 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241398107315 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07908404881 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607414622911 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14615103643 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251175677055 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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