The pie charts compare online sales for retail sectors in various types of categories over a period of a decade in New Zealand.
It is clear that sales for books and film/music sectors increased between 2003 and 2013. By contrast, it is interesting to note that the ratio for travel and clothes sales decreased over the same period shown.
Looking at the pie charts in more detail, the sales ratio of books and film/music(entertainment) used by people stood at 19% and 21 %, accordingly in 2003 and these percentages increased 3% and 12% and reached 22% and 33% respectively in 2013.
It could be explained by the fact that the level of clothes and travel sales were 24% and 36% respectively in 2003 and these percentages went down approximately the same degree just one percentage difference and reached 16% and 29% accordingly in 2013.
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Suggestion:
... of categories over a period of a decade in New Zealand. It is clear that sales...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87412587413 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04631652447 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3272604522 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.4 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393409052649 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214583555155 0.103423049105 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139388930043 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2306245302 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136182058749 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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