Originally technological advancement mostly arise for the benefit of people's life. When people innovate new advanced technology the purpose is for the benefit of people lives. whether this alternations of technology is beneficial or hazard will be a matter of debate. In this Essay, I will set forth two main reason why I believe that technological advancement is beneficial to a society.
Firstly , if there is no any technological advancement people could remain in the same level of living conditions. There could not be any improvement of peoples lives.No advancement in the thinking and no more exposition to new advancement. Research conduct by the University of clorodia revealed that with the advancement of technology in medical sphere reduces the rate of women's death related to complications during pregnancy's by 67% in 2001. For instances if the fetes is in a wrong position which causes the death of the baby and the heath of the mother, the doctors can discover ahead through the help of technology and saves the lives of both the baby and the mother. In Ethiopia, many expecting mothers suffer, because of the technology is not advanced as in the developed countries .The advancement of technology is not same thing which is luxury's, it is necessities.
Secondly, in the transportation area it has a huge impact. it reduces traffic collusion's. the technology applied in The traffic laws contributes to the reduction of collations. The introduction of Airplane makes life more easy. For example if same ones parent is sick and the kids want to take their parents to Hospital instead of taking hours to drive a car it is smother to take a plane and arrive in the hospital to save the life.
it is undeniable that the more a technology is advances is the more peoples became more selfish. The level of humanity reduces to the extent of introducing Nuclear powers. The introduction of guns and weapons stills cause for the killing of many. Countries are still fighting and spend a lot of money for buying this disaster instrument, Which is a product of technological advancement .
In conclusion, the more a technology is advanced and if people are aware to choice and decided to use for building their future ,and if the use it wisely I believe that the advancement will contribute for the benefit and have a foreseeable better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 1615.20841683 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 124.0 315.596192385 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26612903226 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17413547285 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 176.041082164 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637096774194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0125648846 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.833333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159195318242 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805674401373 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0215714796853 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119047249419 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00830991718214 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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