In the current era, the environment is deteriorating at an exponential pace. On the one hand, a portion of masses suggest that authorities can only curb the problem by putting the legislation and depreciating industries; however, there is a contrast opinion from the rest of masses, who believe that every citizen can play a major role towards saving the environment toward degrading further. This essay will emphasize both the view and will also suggest why it is important that both governments, as well as citizens, are required for sustainable development.
To embark upon, there are numerous factors because of which people believe that it's the government that owns the ownership to shield the atmosphere. Firstly, the government holds the power for any nation and can slash the access of resources to large industries, which are majorly responsible for contaminating air and water quality near about. Secondly, they can promote the uses of recyclable products and depreciate people from availing single-use plastic products. Finally, it's the government that has all the records of pollution and other reports; therefore, they could restrict access to eco-sensitive zones where the environment is gravely destroyed and may move industries from that area.
On the other hand, there is also a theory that the government can not do everything for a citizen everyone should come forward to resolve this problem from spreading further. Firstly, a citizen may start using recyclable bags while going out for shopping. For example, taking a textile bag and steel bottle water. This will help in the minimal use of single-use plastics. Secondly, an individual, or with the help of NGOs, may run an awareness drive towards the problem which have been causing due to excess use of natural resources. Furthermore, a citizen may switch to an alternative source of energy as well as using public transport instead of private vehicles. Thus even a minute's efforts from a person may help significantly for the greater good for mankind.
To recapitulate, mother earth can only be preserved from cumulative efforts from the government as well as the citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 499, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... it is important that both governments, as well as citizens, are required for sustainable ...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...rs because of which people believe that its the government that owns the ownership ...
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Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...g single-use plastic products. Finally, its the government that has all the records...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25217391304 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88056740192 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576811594203 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1972221648 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809195899721 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267156734896 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023695784295 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511963925595 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158054660384 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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