More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
In modern society, the most important controversial issue relates to vehicles operated in private. It is treated as a majority of the method to travel around in the current.
Regarding the statement, the number of disadvantages is expected. First of all, it is brutal for the environment, if more people tend to use cars, the chemical emission from automobiles is likely to give the biggest influence to air, which accelerates the damage of air pollution and global warming significantly. Moreover, wild animals seems to lose its inhabitants by expending the roads. the degradation of the forest and plants is not only leading to increase the extinction of animals but also causing of the lack in the immune system for the human's body. Furthermore, it will be decreased that people stay in the atmosphere cleared by the ability of plants.
In order to reduce the potential crisis, proper solutions must be required considerably. Firstly, the awareness of the public is the most crucial factor for the first step toward the prevention of the planet. Therefore, the government should attribute to encourage the usage of the public transportation rather than the personal vehicle. In addition, financial support for the development of the electricity car must be provided to scientists, whose effort will assist of reduction in use of fossil fuel remarkably. Then, the replacement of the chemical is likely to have made the environment better in a short future.
In conclusion, In spite of using the personal automobiles for the accomplishment of people's further convenience, numerous of drawbacks will have occurred simultaneously in the consequence. Therefore, in my opinion, certain outlets to reduce of the cons regarding to the current feature must be considered seriously.
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- More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of problems over reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. 11
- More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. 11
- More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examp 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...its inhabitants by expending the roads. the degration of the forest and plants is n...
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Line 5, column 662, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...spher cleared by the ability of plants. In order to reduce the potential crisis,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30147058824 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12187560073 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1534235869 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0551213413562 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0141377135302 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02014750174 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0288466397271 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106247652876 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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