International travel is becoming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
Much attention has been drawn to whether a large number of nations welcoming global citizens to cross their borders is a positive improvement. On the one hand, this globalization phenomenon provides valuable experience for each individual. However, on the other hand, some cultural aspects might be negatively affected due to not well thought out action of tourists.
In term of benefits, the governments offer an opportunity for their citizens by making international travel more affordable. In particular, people who dream of setting their feet onto a faraway land and experiencing the authentic lifestyle of any foreign culture can make their dream come true. For instance, Americans in the past who were interested in the Japanese culture could only appreciate the beauty via platform such as anime and manga, along with the media. They, nowadays, can even taste Takoyaki, fit on the Kimono or participate in sushi making classes after just a few hours on economy-class flights. On top of that, the tourism industry will be developed, bringing high additional income for every country.
As far as disadvantages are concerned, public facilities damage is a major one. It is undeniable that there will always be individual who does not realize how important some objects are to the local people. Consider a family which is on a holiday to another country with the kids. Not only might the kids run back and forth making loud noise in places like a war museum, but they might also break or move the artifacts on display. These actions will lead to an unpleasant situation for both the parents as well as the museum staff. Although many people are polite and courteous, some specific religious rules, such as not wearing shorts to the church and pagoda or not talking while ceremony is conducted, are disregarded.
In conclusion, the benefits of boosted tourism are as significant as the drawbacks. Even though this essay believes giving everyone the chance to discover the world is a wonderful forward step in the course of history, each of us much take the responsibility to learn the culture and respect the citizens of nation that we are going to.
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- International travel is becoming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...uch attention has been drawn to whether a large number of nations welcoming global citizens to cr...
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Line 9, column 504, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...pleasant situation for both the parents as well as the museum staff. Although many people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07843137255 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77890349025 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641456582633 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4927449573 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928620440273 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288129575452 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044942695074 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449037101857 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315890796681 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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