In the last few decades, technology has seen a rapid growth. While some people argue that technology has depreciated the crime rate, other believes that it has increased it. This essay will put the light on both the views and also suggest how the former view is superior to the latter.
To begin with, technology has added several benefits in the society to curb the crime like CCTV camera, GPS tracking and app based security applications. Firstly, with the growth of information technology, the traditional security elements have taken a leap. To put it into the other words, conventional security equipment like CCTV is now connected to internet and can be monitored even being a thousand of kilometers away. For instance,last year one of my neighbor was at his hometown when burglar entered his premises, thanks to the technology he was notified immediately. Secondly, there are various mobile based and computer based application, which are now being used for surveillance purpose. For instance, GPS has helped a number of vehicles to be tracked and found. Finally, with the internet banking is in place, people carry less or no cash with them. Therefore, even some mishaps happens they do not loss a big amount.
However, there are people who believes that there is surge in crime rates after the growth in technology. Firstly, with the presence of almost everyone on social media, it has become very easy to track whereabouts of individuals because of which a person's privacy is in danger. For instance, one of my relatives bike was stolen from his home when he had posted about his vacation in a distant city. Secondly, there is a spike in fraud which has been done via internet banking. To elucidate, often this person impersonate themselves as an employee of bank asks about the critical information about your bank account. Apparently, there has not been much case reported like the above two mentioned cases and what we have seen that the technology has more benefits compare to it's demerits.
To recapitulate, this essay has discussed both the points about the technology towards the crime and have also discussed why it has helped to curb the crime rates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...suggest how the former view is superior than the latter. To begin with, technolog...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
... the traditional security elements have take a leap. To put it into the other words,...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...nternet and can be monitored even being thousand of kilometers away. For instance,last y...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , last
...housand of kilometers away. For instance,last year one of my neighbor was at his home...
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Line 3, column 861, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...people carry less or no cash with them. Therefore even some mishaps happens they do not l...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...ecome very easy to track whereabouts of an individuals because of which a persons privacy is i...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, even so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98626373626 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67066175071 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574175824176 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3313555304 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.764705882 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190872692079 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610751503159 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762990505508 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150326875911 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811486786874 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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