The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-minute information on a the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown
<p style="line-height: normal; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-right: 0in; direction: ltr; unicode-bidi: embed;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Verdana; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; color: black;">The
given figure illustrates the process used by the Australian Bureau of
Meteorology to forecast the weather. There are four stages in the process,
beginning with the collection of information about the weather. This
information is then </span><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Verdana; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; color: black;">analysed</span><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Verdana; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; color: black;">,
prepared for presentation and finally broadcast to the public.</span></p>
<p style="line-height: normal; margin-top: 0pt; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-right: 0in; direction: ltr; unicode-bidi: embed;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Verdana; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; color: black;">Looking
at the first and second stages of the process, there are three ways of
collecting weather data and three ways of </span><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Verdana; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; color: black;">analysing</span><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Verdana; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; color: black;">
it. Firstly, incoming information can be received by satellite and presented
for analysis as a satellite photo. The same data can also be passed to a radar
station and presented on a radar screen or synoptic chart. Finally, drifting
buoys also receive data which can be shown on a synoptic chart. In the third
stage of the process, the weather broadcast is prepared on computers. Finally,
it is delivered to the public on television, on the radio or as a recorded
telephone announcement.</span></p>
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- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-minute information on a the weather in order to produce reliable forecastsWrite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown 61
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-minute information on a the weather in order to produce reliable forecastsWrite a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 965.302439024 198% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 8.04641350211 4.92477711251 163% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.33894875824 2.65546596893 239% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455696202532 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 283.868780488 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.45097560976 145% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 337.443305423 43.030603864 784% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.375 112.824112599 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 29.625 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 3.83414634146 417% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0464374854674 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470455955919 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495396940308 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.037979393854 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482197404722 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 13.2329268293 237% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.26 61.2550243902 -0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.3012195122 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 30.0 11.4140731707 263% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 11.4329268293 223% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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