The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over berween 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The proportion of population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three different countries have been increasing so many percents. In Japan, the population aged 65 and over has decreased less than 5% from 1940 to 1980 but has been increasing from 1980 to 2040. From 2020 to 2040, it's going to happening fast, over 5% to over 25%. In Sweden, the proportion looks like a stair, started from over 5% to over 25%. It's growing up year to year, so old-population in Sweden is similar to Japan at the end and start but the process is not the same. The last country is USA, the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 have been increasing from 9% to less than 25%. The percent of population aged 65 and over in USA started higher than Japan and Sweden but at the end it's going to less than both of it. Summary, three countries have been going to increase a lot of old-populations from 1940 to 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...er than Japan and Sweden but at the end its going to less than both of it. Summary,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28235294118 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45482365345 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 127.690721649 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423529411765 0.622605031667 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.7676704597 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223456822745 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133833060494 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722263131029 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223456822745 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 70.7449484536 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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