Dear Amit,
Thanks for writing an email and asking for my inputs on your future plans. Firstly, hearty congratulation on completing your graduation in animation design. I am glad to see that you have secured excellent marks in degree and I would suggest you to look for an job.
Though it is preferable to pursue post graduation but considering few factor i figure out job would be a better choice for you. Definitely, In higher studies you will get chance to know about subjects in depth but still you will be missing practicals which is more exciting in your stream. Nevertheless, some companies give opportunity for distance courses as well.
Being a your close friend i know your financial condition. Additionally, As per serveral sources animation market is booming and you have right time to grab your dream job. Keep posting me in case you need any help or suggestion.
Best wishes for your future endeavour.
Devendra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Amit, Thanks for writing an email and asking f...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ree and I would suggest you to look for an job. Though it is preferable to pu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I would suggest you to look for an job. Though it is preferable to pursue post g...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factor seems to be countable; consider using: 'few factors'.
Suggestion: few factors
... pursue post graduation but considering few factor i figure out job would be a better choi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t graduation but considering few factor i figure out job would be a better choice...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...but still you will be missing practicals which is more exciting in your stream. N...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'your'?
Suggestion: a; your
... for distance courses as well. Being a your close friend i know your financial cond...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s as well. Being a your close friend i know your financial condition. Addition...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have right time to grab your dream job. Keep posting me in case you need any hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, nevertheless, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80734250163 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689024390244 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.030641816 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230020660403 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822997406216 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065612577946 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128474293049 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576475036188 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.