Undeniably, rival firms bombard consumers with countless promotional adverts and commercials. This essay intends to discuss how these advertisements have an impact on customers and viable solutions to safeguard their interest.
Admittedly, advertisements are informative as these keep the customers up-to-date with current and trending products in market. However, recently companies have been indulging in unfair means to promote their goods and services. Firstly, firms hire celebrities to endorse thier products. Since follow them blindly, they end up buying unnecessary products. More surprisingly, famous people support those commodities that are detrimental for health. A Bollywood actor favouring a beverage that has health damaging effects is an epitome in this regard. Secondly, search optimization techniques used by firms target people who use internet. Pop up ads keep on flashing on screen unless the person buy specific product. These results into frivolous spending as these items generally make way to shopping basket.
This situatuon requires immediate attention before it gets worse. For this, government needs to regulate the advertisement industries. A censor board must be in place to sift out irrelevant and exaggerated content of ads. This would ensure that commercials are more informative and less delusional. Moreover, it is high time that celebs should be responsible and contribute productively to society. They must understand that people consider them idols and their acts are rational. Furthermore, ads on internet must be abandoned at once, if the viewers wish to do so.
To conclude, promotional and commercials affect consumer to a great extent that too negatively; however various solutions can be undertaken to control it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77099236641 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0409285858 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709923664122 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8444869265 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5789473684 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7894736842 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121806076341 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031354182515 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375302922717 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836125398713 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330956662216 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.59 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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