The given table and bar chart demonstrates the amount of time spent by males and females on household chores and recreational activities in Britain.
Overall, it can be noticed that both the sexes are spending least time on sports related activities, and most time on household chores.
In the given graph, both the genders are spending the highest amount of time on doing cleaning and washing, which is just above 20 minutes for men, and just below 80 minutes for women. However, a fair amount of time, just around 20 minutes and 40 minutes are spent by both men and women on shopping respectively. Although, both the genders have contradicting involvement in repair works and clothes washing and ironing, with men contributing less in washing and ironing and vice versa.
On the contrary, the table shows that the maximum amount of time is spent on TV, Video and Radio, which is just around couple of hours for both the sexes. In addition, both males and females are only spending under 20 minutes on reading and sports activities.
- The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities in Britain Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 85
- The line graph and the bar chart give the information and forecast about the vehicle numbers and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rele 73
- The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities in Britain.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spending the least'.
Suggestion: spending the least
... can be noticed that both the sexes are spending least time on sports related activities, and ...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spending the highest'.
Suggestion: spending the highest
...n the given graph, both the genders are spending highest amount of time on doing cleaning and wa...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: AS_OPPOSE_TO_AS_OPPOSED_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as opposed to'?
Suggestion: as opposed to
...ound couple of hours for both the sexes as oppose to only spending under 20 minutes on readi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87790697674 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53196840038 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.7886475736 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.833333333 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146287883106 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874759332784 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784285270339 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118447497433 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774961641799 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.