The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Could it be said that only after the end of one generation comes true assessment of the greatness of an individuals ?
Indeed, true greatness can be defined, assessed and judged at anytime, but only more clearly if judged at first instance with firsthand point of view and information.
Clearly, the success of every individual can be perceived by their contemporaries largely because they are made to live through quite similar times with the norms of that period so they would be able to quantify the beauty of one who truly possess ingenuity and sagacity as they would often stand out amongst their peer.
Although of frequent occurrence is the case were the greatness of individual are for some reason are clouded by later come to light after their demise of perhaps many b generations later. Largely this is due to the fact that sometime there is so much hate and propaganda in there time but the later generation are able to picture these individuals from a disinterested point of view.
Moreso, individual of the same generation will be better placed to judge their contemporaries since they would be on the same pedestal and will have mixed feels about themselves, about their colleagues and would mostly compete in the journey of success and it is on that note that those who have made a distinction will be acknowledged by friends and foes and such a robust perspective is most realistic.
Furthermore, there is greatness that cannot be hidden to denied as seen I the life of great artists like Michael Jackson, Whitney Houston and some their comtemporaries who graced their stages having the most of their colleagues recommend them for multiple awards and titles in recognition of their greatness.
Inconclusion, it is without any doubt that the greatness of individual is better decided by their contemporaries as they have a vintage point as they understand the sensitivities of the time as even they are judged by that very time as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...mes true assessment of the greatness of an individuals ? Indeed, true greatness can be defin...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by their contemporaries largely because they are made to live through quite simi...
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Line 11, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat cannot be hidden to denied as seen I the life of great artists like Michael J...
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Line 13, column 129, Rule ID: VINTAGE_POINT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'vantage point'?
Suggestion: vantage point
... by their contemporaries as they have a vintage point as they understand the sensitivities of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97575757576 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8172784553 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.1683800458 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 205.25 118.986275619 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.25 23.4991977007 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197801661537 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919253896688 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360564753335 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986302285981 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247100012264 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 14.1392134831 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 48.8420337079 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.1743820225 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.