Some people think that living in a large city brings great opportunities to the citizens. However opponents believe that there are more disadvantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the matter and give relevant examples.
advertisement is one of the most common ways that manufacturers use to market their products and introduce them to customers. it is said that advertising causes customers to buy unnecessary things and it is a waste of money to do so. I personally agree with this statement for two reasons: adverts often exaggerate the quality of the goods and the producers usually invite celebrities to lure the fan's minds.
there is no surprise that the actual products usually look completely different from their advertisements. most advertisements and commercial videos are made with vivid colors, which helps stimulate the buyers' interests. For videos, there are sounds and music that make the goods more appealing to the customers. Moreover, the reason why the real products do not look the same is that, the makers also add in special materials when taking pictures and making videos. For example, when they take pictures of cakes, they use shaving foam instead of whipping cream. Or, sometimes they mix mashed potatoes with resplendent colors to take pictures of ice-cream because potatoes do not melt. For these reasons, consumers end up purchasing such products because they are tricked by the sumptuous look of deceptive advertisements.
it is no longer strange to see famous people on advertisements nowadays. this is the manufacturers' strategy to attract customers by having their goods publicized by super stars. most of the fans would obviously buy the products as a way to show their encouragement to their idols. Additionally, fans have a tendency to desire to own the same things as their idol's. As a part of the contract, the celebrities have to use certain products during the promoting season. there celebrities' lovers can see these products through events and videos and they will then attempt to purchase them. this shows that most people do not need the products, yet they still buy them because of the celebrities's appearance.
In conclusion, the producers usually make their products more fascinating and invite famous people to emerge in their advertisements to allure buyers to buy unnecessary products. this means that consumers should raise awareness when it comes to shopping so that they will not be tricked by the manufacturers. buying only what they need can not only save each individual's money, but it can help protect the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16971279373 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91382408262 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522193211488 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6309969772 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0211046742826 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00776545882843 0.084324248473 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0158772757851 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0142990028174 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109494651328 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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