You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Julia,
Hi, how are how? hope that you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have started a new job in a mutual fund.
My previous job was in Business Process Outsourcing which had a very hectic work schedule. It used to take one and half hours to reach to office and the working hours were also very late which affected my social life. Moreover, the pay scale was also very low and the company did not have the policy of either providing promotion or giving a hike in the salary. So, I was planning to change my job that is more comfortable and provide chances of growth
I have started my new job in IDFC Mutual Fund. The working hours are very comfortable and flexible and also it just takes 20 minutes to reach there which is very convenient. Furthermore, the salary is very attractive and the company also provide the opportunity of enhancement of career. They also have a trend of appraising the work of the employees yearly with awards.
Additionally, I have enrolled in MBA course in distance education from Amity University along with my job as this will help to increase my knowledge and skills.
I hope you will take out some of your time to visit me in Canada. Hope to see you soon.
With Love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
Dear Julia, Hi, how are how? hope that you are having a joyous time. I am...
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Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nada. Hope to see you soon. With Love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou soon. With Love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50214592275 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45463547491 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562231759657 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1989366861 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9285714286 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194851527594 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704953334158 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770669489975 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120125401913 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783030806348 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.