In this day and age, due to change in the lifestyle of people, stress and anxiety among people has increased. some individuals propose that stress can be reduced by fixing some time of the day in which person spends by not doing anything. from my perspective, although this can be one of the solutions of problem of taking stress, but there can other remedies as well for this.
It is true that when people are stressed, their mind is filled with negative thoughts and by doing nothing, the mind gets relaxed. This is because, by this, mind gets diverted from everyday activities, and it gets time to rethink over the difficulties which can be reason for finding the solution of stressful solution.
Others remedies that can reduce the stress except doing nothing at all are meditation, yoga, entertainment and doing exercise everyday. Watching videos related to stress diminishing techniques can also be beneficial. For instance, videos of brahmkumari shiwani in which she explains the ways how to tackle worries and control ones negative emotions by breaking the link between outer circumstances from the internal feelings.
To conclude, it can be stated that considering that doing nothing at all is perfect technique to combat stress is wrong. Nevertheless, there are many other ways which are more advantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13888888889 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7457880202 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587962962963 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5270280183 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179908409471 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806906546656 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630156241058 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118571331098 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394295773025 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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