Lawbreakers committed various crimes.Crime rates are skyrocketing.There isn't a consensus on whether fixed punishments or flexible arrangements should be applied for the better world.Ones claim that there should be standard punishments related to a type of a crime.Others insist on adjusting punishments through criminal's intention and varying individual circumstances.
On the one hand, People usually have tendency of eliminating criminals from society and isolating them from the world.As a result of this opinion , a group of people focus on fixed punishments.In this group of people it is mostly thought that providing unchangeable standard for certain crime is a way of treating each citizen equally.
On the other hand, Another group of people oppose this idea of equality.Because they claim that this kind of equality doesn't fulfill its real function.For example , a criminal who killed a man because he would steal someones's money and a criminal who committed same crime because his life was in danger can not be judged similarly.Because intentions are different.This vital factor determines views of judging conditions.
As for me, Some crimes are committed with different intentions.This issue changes the nature of judging value.There should be a change in the type of punishment even if the same crime is committed.
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- Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punish 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, as for, for example, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58620689655 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40371075106 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8232304369 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 283.5 106.682146367 266% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.75 20.7667163134 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.75 7.06120827912 280% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334976696768 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207955180926 0.084324248473 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105922490975 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207955180926 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105922490975 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.3 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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