According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public’s lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising
Clearly the author here discusses about public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available and lack of advertising about such movies.
The author has also mentioned that the percentage of positive reviews by the movie reviewers increased during the past year. This means there were some the movies which had a good content and story-line. But these reviews were not reaching the real viewers.
For example, there many movies which have received Oscar award, but lack in their advertising. One such movie is 'Slumdog Millionaire'. This was a movie which depicted about a boy's story who was born and bought in a slum in India. The movie received Oscar for its best content. There are so many movies which are underrated but have a very good content. Due to lack of advertising such movies might not get recognized.
On the contrary, it is not only the advertisements that promotes a movie, but also a good content and story-line matters. Reviewers may be honest with their reviews but not always.
Thus, Super Screen should more focus on advertising their movies and reaching out people and divide greater share of their budget on this so that people are aware of the reviews given by the reviewers and opt for a better quality of movies.
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| 2019-12-07 | Venkateshwar | 50 | view |
| 2019-11-25 | Venkateshwar | 23 | view |
| 2019-11-25 | Smrithi B R | 33 | view |
| 2019-11-09 | sampath srini | 50 | view |
| 2019-11-01 | harshalg007 | 42 | view |
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super screen movies a 33
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'boys'' or 'boy's'?
Suggestion: boys'; boy's
...This was a movie which depicted about a boys story who was born and bought in a slum...
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Line 13, column 174, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ay be honest with their reviews but not always. Thus, Super Screen should more fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, thus, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 55.5748502994 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 16.3942115768 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 2260.96107784 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 441.139720559 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91627906977 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47761639845 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 204.123752495 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525581395349 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 705.55239521 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6249429015 57.8364921388 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3076923077 119.503703932 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 23.324526521 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.70786347227 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296977889753 0.218282227539 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109903846368 0.0743258471296 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852939209092 0.0701772020484 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160336296681 0.128457276422 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757472747965 0.0628817314937 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.3799401198 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.3550499002 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.197005988 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 98.500998004 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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