Investment in local amenities such as leisure centres is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit.
Nowadays society is one of the most essential aspects of people's life. Some authorities claimed that the government's in sport centres is the best method to develop a healthy community. This essay will argue why such money investments are almost entirely necessary despite other unordinary ways of joining the local society to name but a few.
It seems that sport has ben united people for many years from diverse demographical societies. The reason for that, is in providing both opportunity to do your favourite hobby or job and meet others. To give an example, I live in one of the residential zones, where the government built a vast amount of leisure centres, and approximately all my current friends I met here. Overall, these few instances have bolstered existing thoughts and opinion, that by constructing sport centres the government boosts the level of unity of certain regional community.
Not only that, but local outdoor festivals are also another great way of getting people closer. While visiting the event with one's own company, it is a big possibility to become friends with someone else, due to the fact that such occasions are created to unite and develop diverse fellowships. For instance, if my native city did not invest money in our annual festivals, they would be all poor, dull and moody, without and result. THerefore, the idea of carrying out special events is currently very common as all countries endeavour to make our society more friendly.
To sum up, this essay argues that people who believe, that sport amenities are the best way to foster a community spirit, underestimate the power of festivals. In my point of view, the leisure centres is not completely the most famous and efficient, as many of us visiting other facilities as well as clubs, which are more favourable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03311258278 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69521779058 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64238410596 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1558622296 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272666028306 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07413759987 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622224185068 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148188786596 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054877738977 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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