You are moving to a new country, write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house.
In your letter, describe:
• yourself and your family
• which area you would like to live in
• and what facilities you need in the house
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Behnaz Yousefi. I have completed my immigration process to Canada and I am looking for housing accommodation. I am a software engineer and have secured a job in the city center near the municipality building. I would like to rent a studio apartment. Since It is only me, I have no family, I would like to save money as much as possible.
As my workplace is located in the urban area, I would rather live somewhere nearby. In addition, I am a light sleeper and even the slightest noises disturb me so I like to rent a house in a quiet neighborhood. Therefore, I do not think I can find a place in the walking distance of my office. I am used to long commutes as long as it is less than one hour is fine with me.
I am looking for a fully furnished house, with all necessary kitchen appliances such as a food blender and a microwave. I prefer to take baths instead of showers hence I want a bathroom equipped with a bathtub. However, I do not need a parking spot since I do not have a valid driving license and I am not planning to buy a car in near future.
thanks in advance for your assistance in my search for an appropriate house.
Yours sincerely,
Behnaz Yousefi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Behnaz Yousefi. I have comple...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... center near the municipality building. I would like to rent a studio apartment. ...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...like to save money as much as possible. As my workplace is located in the urban ...
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Line 13, column 121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...such as a food blender and a microwave. I prefer to take baths instead of showers...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
...ning to buy a car in near future. thanks in advance for your assistance in my se...
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Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ppropriate house. Yours sincerely, Behnaz Yousefi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, therefore, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36681222707 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74214946499 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585152838428 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8246147084 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4285714286 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105996479874 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406148620276 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418055867273 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597007125576 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206378172124 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.