Nowadays, more and more foreign students are going to English-Speaking countries to learn the “international language – English". It is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English-speaking country is the best way, but it is not the only way to learn it.
Nowadays, english becomes the most popular language in the world. Therefore, many people are learning english to gain more opportunities in their careers. As the result, people who come from not-english-speaking countries such as Vietnam, China, etc want to study abroad at the countries which their major language is english. In my point of view, it is the best way, but it is not the only way to learn.
First, everyone can learn english at their own country. Due to the fact that not everyone can go to the expensive centers to study english, online courses appears. Moreover, english channels on YouTube are being created everyday. you needn't pay any fee to watch them. From now on, people can study every time, everywhere they go as long as they get a smart phone or any electronic that can connect to the internet. Besides, a number of english groups on social networks are organized so that people studying it can join in and practice together. And the result is whoever patient is getting better at english. you see, it is not necessary to go to english-speaking countries to study communication.
Second, it is a tendency that a lot of international companies invest in Asia countries which do not speak english. most of those businesses, especially Information Technologies, hotels and Tourism, makes english as a mandatory language to get into the field. For instance, the increase of the english-speaking tourists visiting Vietnam more often than the not-so-distant past has encouraged the students from the hospitality service industries to learn english. The students from the hotel Management and other private sectors think, to gain the fluency and the accent to aid the customers and to enrich their carrier, the students prefer to learn the english language from the widely spoken country. it is another way to study english - practicing while you are at work.
I agree to learn english from an environment where many people speak english so that to adopt the accent and gain more vocabulary but I disagree to learn by going to the english-Speaking country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04057971014 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96753823962 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0607309581 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6111111111 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.554209064523 0.244688304435 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187235025776 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104408436073 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.390882363679 0.151304729494 258% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664657551272 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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