Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork, which of the two approaches do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, parent's time fill with chores, so it's hard for them to make time for their children. Hence, one concern is to make valuable and adequate time for children as parents. So, the main question is How can we do that? I believe parents should have fun and play games or sports with their children. What follows elaborate on my viewpoint.
First, children love who they play with more. As far as I concerned, the children engage with imagination and story, so parents can communicate with their children and know them when they play with them.
In this case, both enjoy their time a lot. For example, my niece, Sara, was born seven years ago.
Before she was six years old, they were always playing sport with each other during the weekends. However, when Sara went to school, my brother attempted to do other things on the weekends like schoolwork.
After two or three months, Sara became frustrated and exhausted on weekends, after her productivity decreased, they decided to do to their old plan.
Furthermore, children can learn by playing sports and game, which is fun and they learn a lot. Playing games prepare us for the real world. I remember, I read a book, which said that the games which you play in young ages, affect your behaviour in old ages.
Therefore, parents can teach children about cruel worlds nicely and pleasantly. For example, I remember, we played a board game, named monopoly, a lot. It was about how we can manage our money to buy land and sell or rent it to another person.
Although I had a lot of fun time, I got familiar with some business phrase which was new to me at that point.
Although, I admit that spend most of the time to playing sport and game may have some drawbacks for children's school-work. So, the parents should balance with school work and playing sport.
To sum up, advocating most of the time to play games and sports have a huge benefit for the children, especially in early ages. Can you ignore happiness during the games?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...can communicate with their children and know them when they play with them. In thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, may, so, therefore, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67705382436 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35350247724 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552407932011 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3468904661 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7826086957 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.347826087 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344717652165 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102053255965 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816721032228 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142762200349 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716122512625 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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