Children should learn co operation.but others think that competition is more important to learn.
Discuss both views give opinion.
Certain people believe that off springs should be encouraged for competition with others whereas other are not agree with them and they think that co-operation is more useful as compared to competition and it helps to children become more useful grown-up. both notions will be explained in impending paragraphs.
There are multifarious reasons why people think that to learn competition is more essential.First and foremost reason is, in modern era. The sense of competition is more important to learn because in every field people want to compete with others to get better work opportunities.To illustrates,after complete their study when people start their business they want to know how to compete with other organisations and if they don't know regarding how to compete with others, so consequently, they will fail to expand their business.Secondly,the sense of competition is also play a significant role games because and games day compete with others to win the game.
On the contrary,other people believe that cooperation is also an important.Firstly, in several times people want to co-operate with others. For instance,when one team loss match and other win that time they accept their loss.In addition, If they do not accept their loss. So definitely this make violence.secondly, cooperation is also help to make society better and without violence because when people will co-operate with others in their workplace, public places,so consequently, all people get benefits.
To conclude, from my perspective, both skills play an important role to become useful person. So both skills should be learnt by children because only one quality cannot help you make better community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45627376426 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27049248504 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528517110266 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.763288252 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.444444444 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7777777778 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20222865714 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872956522916 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636556472694 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132309520749 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637632899661 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.