First impressions are important. Some people think doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job.
To what extent do you agree?
It is true that people tend to judge another person by its appearance and first impression. This is why it is considered by some people that an interview is highly important in the process of getting a desirable job. I partly agree with this opinion because an interview is the key factor in employer’s decision-making whether a person will be hired or not.
First, if a person even has lack of qualification, a smooth interview may play significant role in their employment. The reason of it is that soft-skills in certain types of jobs such as sales may be more important that formal education and many employers tend to choose those candidates who was able to attract them. In addition, an interview is an occasion to demonstrate extra skills that were not mentioned in a resume. Actually, successful interview is 50% of success.
However, it will be wrong to assert that an impressive interview is the main reason for employment. In fact, hard skills and work experience equally important or even more important for securing a good job. Especially, it is crucial for those occupations as surgeons, pilots, engineers where technical skills or deep knowledge of a subject are demanding. Thus, e person who wish to find a good job should concentrate on education and gaining necessary skills first and only after that concern about an interview.
In conclusion, I agree that first impression is important to certain extent, meanwhile real working experience and education is more important for being hired for well-paid and interesting job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ired for well-paid and interesting job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11328125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01542259683 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56640625 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3548331181 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.083333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195732729156 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729328034385 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432337587157 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126051665484 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336155967824 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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