The company you are working for offers fund and required things to the group of local community every year.Write a letter to your manager suggesting a group you know in your community.
• What is the group.
• What do they do and why helping them is a good idea.
• How company fund can help them.
Dear Mr. Simon
Recently, I came to know about the charity that company makes on every new year to the group of deprived section of society. I really appreciate this gesture of company. I am writing to tell you about one such group that I have been helping since past 2 years.
In the south-western region of our city named Delhi, there is an NGO that takes care of widows. They have been prey to the natural and social factors which made them land up there. Their respective families no more want to keep them. Some of them are even wives of our matryed soldiers. There are around some 200 women in the group which runs by the name of “New Life”.
The house in which the organisation is set has been donated by an ex-army officer. The women there are enrolled into different vocational courses like tailoring, gardening, cooking and some other courses as per their area of interest. Regular and weekend both types of classes are held. Assisting them will help them secure their future and not only make them self-reliant, but also a recognised section of our society.
Providing them with the necessary materials like books, tools for gardening, and tailoring machines will aid them in polishing their skills and will have a good hand over their area of work. As the NGO offers these courses, they need more more of practical sessions on such equipments. Company’s funds can help them in providing all these necessary tools so that in long run they can acquire good jobs for themselves and financially secure them.
I am really looking forward for a positive response from you as this is a good opportunity to empower helpless women
Yours sincerely
Udita Jaitly
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: more
...the NGO offers these courses, they need more more of practical sessions on such equipment...
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Line 17, column 235, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'more' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: more
...the NGO offers these courses, they need more more of practical sessions on such equipment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 291.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90378006873 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51503197989 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 290.88556701 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0975038267 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1875 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203092735299 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541124496146 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505394717847 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102199714928 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520112457443 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.