You want to sell some of your furniture.You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.Write a letter to your friend.In your letter: 1) explain why you are selling 2) describe the furniture 3) suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture.
Hi behzad,
How are you? I'm sorry I can write to you one month later. These days I am involved in moving my house. I promise to send you a letter soon. And I hope you have had a good time.
Like I said I'm changing my house and I'm going to sell some home furniture. I thought to myself maybe you need some of them and want to buy.In doing so, I will not be giving the extra money to the shipping agency and giving them to a friend who really needs these tools.
The furniture I want to sell includes: A double bed that is white and perfectly healthy and you just need to replace the mattress.The next item is the refrigerator. I bought this refrigerator last year and it's almost new.But because the kitchen of my new home is small and doesn't fit in, I want to sell it. It also has a one year warranty.Finally, I have a fairly large library, and because I have finished my studies and do not need my books,I would like to sell this library before moving to my new home.
I'm home next weekend and if you would like to come together and come and see the furniture.Of course I have a good discount for you.
Best wishes
Sudabeh
PS:I forgot to tell you that I invited you to a party. I organized a farewell party and invited my neighbors.I am happy to accept my invitation. We will meet again and you will see the furnitures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
Hi behzad, How are you? Im sorry I can write to you one month late...
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Suggestion: I'm
... have had a good time. Like I said Im changing my house and Im going to sell ...
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Suggestion: I'm
... Like I said Im changing my house and Im going to sell some home furniture. I th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...e you need some of them and want to buy.In doing so, I will not be giving the extr...
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Line 13, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: The
...d you just need to replace the mattress.The next item is the refrigerator. I bought...
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Suggestion: But
...frigerator last year and its almost new.But because the kitchen of my new home is s...
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Line 13, column 274, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: doesn't
...the kitchen of my new home is small and doesnt fit in, I want to sell it. It also has ...
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Line 13, column 340, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...ell it. It also has a one year warranty.Finally, I have a fairly large library, and bec...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...shed my studies and do not need my books,I would like to sell this library before ...
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Suggestion: I'm
...rary before moving to my new home. Im home next weekend and if you would like...
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Suggestion: Of
...together and come and see the furniture.Of course I have a good discount for you. ...
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Suggestion: I
...farewell party and invited my neighbors.I am happy to accept my invitation. We wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, really, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30078125 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45921008322 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.575958013 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6428571429 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253847012852 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969441152838 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574869681343 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153137372863 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039967050777 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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