Music's Effects
it is a fact that music is one of the best ways to connect people together in different customs and age groups.
there are special types of music which have not been composed for a specified area or nation. These kinds of music have been made and performed so that the majority enjoy watching it or listening. For example, Yanni artworks are fully brilliant in this regard. His performance and type of music have been chosen in a glamorous aspect, and most of the audiences with different languages and ages enjoy it.
On the other hand, music as a significant part of human's art plays an important role in expressing ideas as well as emotions. By this way, music can replace violence between people with friendly relationships. it can act as a bridge to connect discrepant nations of different tastes, peacefully. We could see this phenomenon during the past years when the western and eastern Germany joined together via destroying the constructed walls. Afterwards, they sang songs together while were enjoying common music which made pleasurable sense between them.
However, there are some drawbacks about spreading the music of a nation between the other countries which I do not agree with. The point is that, if a country accepts and spreads the music of other countries limitless and with no consideration, it may lose its traditional music and culture. Meanwhile, they might forget their music and consequently relevant history that would be desirable to transfer to the next generations. As an instance, Jazz and Rock music which are more prevalent among western countries, should not completely be superseded with eastern old music.
In my honest opinion, it is better that people preserve their music fundamentals and historical cultures while adopting the other constructive types of music from the other nations. By this method, music can certainly bring people throughout the world to eradicate violence and bring peace and happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18808777429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72316557385 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595611285266 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1821941507 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225545379125 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817334259777 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446554049393 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131989273735 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356443143508 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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