You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very god.
You want to tell him how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer. In your letter
say how you feel about his performance
give details of your musical activities
explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear Mr. Brown,
I went to the concert last Friday in Chicago, and I have to say that it was a feast of ears. The performance was amazing that I thoroughly enjoyed myself and learnt a lot singing techniques from your show.
As a student in musical school, I intend to pursue singing as my career. Passionate about music since I was in middle school, I found myself interested in anything related to singing. I have alway been listening to songs and singing along to fill in my free time. With strong determination in music, I grasp every opportunity to perform on stage, which is my way to make sure I keep practicing and learning. However, there is one thing that I really concerned recently, which is that I could not find my own style of singing. Although I kept practicing, little progress was made in the past few month.
I've watched an interview where you talked about how you practice and finally became a professional singer. That was very inspiring for someone like me since we could foresee our chance of becoming a singer. I was wondering would it be possible for you to share your experience regarding how you overcome difficulties and find your own singing style. I greatly appreciate your time and look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Alan Watson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 592, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'few months'.
Suggestion: few months
...g, little progress was made in the past few month. Ive watched an interview where y...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...s was made in the past few month. Ive watched an interview where you talked a...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78666666667 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65242865649 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9243622425 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8461538462 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301819201267 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908636496594 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105244379199 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181317402672 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167426657774 0.0580467560999 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.