You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- ask them for help finding an accommodation
- tell them where you would like to live
- tell them the type of place you are looking for
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am very glad to inform you that I am moving to your city Mumbai for work. It is a great honor for me to receive this job opportunity in such a big city like Mumbai.
As I do not know the city, well it will be my first time visiting that place, I would request you to please lend me your support in finding an accommodation in Mumbai. It would be very convenient for me If I can get a place in the close vicinity to my office which is in Meera Road. I am looking for one-bedroom flat as I will be staying alone there, so renting a big apartment is not required. keeping the safety and security in mind, I would love to have a place in a nice complex where other people with families or maybe even bachelor are living. Of course, a very important thing which needs to be taken care of is that the rent should be within my budget. As I will not be able to afford paying high rent now.
I would really appreciate if you can help me do all these as you are the person I can rely on. Looking forward to your response.
Thanks & Regards,
Kiran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 141, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
... please lend me your support in finding an accommodation in Mumbai. It would be very convenient ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 396, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Keeping
...enting a big apartment is not required. keeping the safety and security in mind, I woul...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 539, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple with families or maybe even bachelor are living. Of course, a very important ...
^^
Line 13, column 696, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to pay'.
Suggestion: to pay
...budget. As I will not be able to afford paying high rent now. I would really appr...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, really, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15789473684 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27609085257 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593301435407 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9647174103 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255260595752 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896696975295 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707297153736 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184953369386 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190786007272 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.