Business whether big or small is to maximize profit Do you agree with that Give your opinion

Businesses all around the world try to be unique and effective. Whether it is big or small, every business thrive to be more profitable. This essay will discuss how these businesses try to be profitable no matter the size.
In order to maximize the profit, one of the factors that businesses follow is lowering the cost of the product. The cost of the product can be cut down by reducing the cost of raw materials as well as the cost of the labor. For Instance, many major companies as well as small businesses, use labour and raw material in countries like china where labour and raw materials are cheaper. As a result, the business profit will increase rapidly in a short span of time.
The other strategy that businesses use in order to maximize the profit is to conduct huge marketing campaigns using advertisements. These marketing campaigns will psychologically let the consumer to buy the brand instead of the product. For example, when a consumer goes into a supermarket, he will automatically be persuaded to buy the product that he saw in a commercial rather than the same exact product that he had never heard of. So, marketing campaigns will also contribute to maximize profits of a business.
The essay discussed how businesses try to maximize profit, whether it is big or small using marketing and outsourcing labour. In my opinion, I think when it comes to business, strategies should be taken in order to maximize profit.

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Average: 8.5 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83400809717 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83418738588 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522267206478 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2354235129 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225969647277 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099756319579 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852581216066 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163374447587 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860196011929 0.0609392437508 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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