Cities in many countries tend to get bigger and more people than in the past. Why people want to move to the cities instead of living in rural areas and how to solve this problem have been discussed for a long time. This set of materials will consider causes and find solutions to this problem.
First of all, a lot of jobs are only in the cities, which is different from the suburb that there are few jobs. A computer engineer is one of the examples of careers in the cities because most IT companies are usually built in town due to high technologies such as high-speed internet, electronic equipment, and so on; therefore, it is quite difficult to find a job outside the cities. This is why people choose to live in urban areas rather than in rural areas. However, we can solve these problems by developing other areas the same as that in the town. The government has to spend money investing in the rural areas or poor areas in the countries to create a new job. When there are jobs that can make revenue to local people, those who are in the cities will move back to their home and work there. Thus, this solution can decrease the population in the cities.
Another cause is that there is plenty of entertainment which cannot find in the rural. People who have never seen some fascinating things in the big metropolis will be impressed when seeing those things for the first time, so they want to move from their homeland to the cities to investigate a thing that looks strange in their eyes. If there are many people like this, it might affect the number of cities' inhabitants. The government, consequently, should create tourism campaigns or advertisements to other places such as beaches, mountains, and so on in order to move the interest of people to places that can make money to the country. We can get benefits both decreasing crowded in the cities and making money.
At the end of the day, there are a lot of methods to solve the problem of population. Not only do we spread advancement to the rural areas, but we also can create a campaign to invite people to go to other places. If the government pays more attention to this problem, it will not be difficult to solve the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'place'.
Suggestion: place
...order to move the interest of people to places that can make money to the country. We ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as to, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52882205514 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46567888511 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.364530506 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.388888889 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185326952354 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636060982303 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631291321185 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126799390162 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899857663159 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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