The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts depict the information about amount of revenue and expenditure over a year of a children's charity in the USA. The data is calibrated into percentage.
It can be vividly seen that donated food accounted for the majority of the income while program services accounted for the most expenditure. In the left pie chart, donated food was top of the table with maximum (86.6%) contribution in the charity revenue whereas 10.4 and 2.2 percent part collected from community contribution and program revenue respectively. Moreover, Others income sources contribution (0.4%) was twice than Gra...
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- university lecturer now able to put their lecture on internet for students to read which reduce the importance of face to face lecture. do you believe it is a good idea to involve internet in formal education and give your opinion. 90
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 85
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i got 7.5 bands so, according
i got 7.5 bands so, according to rules, give me sticky stemp and 10 points also and second is, please tell me, which things stop my score at 7.5 instead of 8 or 8.5 bands.
Yes, you got 20 points and
Yes, you got 20 points and sticky tags for two essays. Look:
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and there are still grammar issues to stop you getting 8.0
almost all revenue (95.8%) spent on program services
almost all revenues (95.8%) are spent on program services
whereas 10.4 and 2.2 percent part collected from community contribution and program revenue respectively
whereas 10.4 and 2.2 percent part are collected from community contribution and program revenue respectively
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 181 200
No. of Characters: 948 1000
No. of Different Words: 105 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.668 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.238 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.874 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 73 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.351 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.433 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.712 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4