"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
Author claims that the complaints received from the viewers were concerned with coverage of weather and local news but there is no valid data or study that has been conducted to examine that complaints are belonging to local news and weather, complaints might have received due to some other technical problem which the viewers are facing in their area or now days many news channels are offering viewers differnt rechange pacakages so viewers may be calling and complaining that your television is not offfering any rechange offer.
local businesses may have canceled their advertising contracts beacuse of some other reasons but not due to national news. there is no specific study which conclude that advertising contracts has been canceled beacause of national news.there will other reason thait has happed like these local companies not have that much fund to give advertisement,may be they think that number of viewers less less on this television as compare to other television.
restoring the devoted time to weather and local news will not help to improve the revenues beacuse their might be some other reasons for that so In order to avoid losing advertising revenues, television staion should think to increase their viewers by attracting them with discount recharge offer, they should attract the local business companies by giving them good advertising offer which they will feel profitable.
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- "Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerne 33
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[4]
Message: The verb belong is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
...en conducted to examine that complaints are belonging to local news and weather, complaints m...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...en conducted to examine that complaints are belonging to local news and weather, complaints m...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Local
... is not offfering any rechange offer. local businesses may have canceled their adve...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...r reasons but not due to national news. there is no specific study which conclude tha...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , may
...ave that much fund to give advertisement,may be they think that number of viewers le...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...ve that much fund to give advertisement,may be they think that number of viewers less ...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: less
...ay be they think that number of viewers less less on this television as compare to other ...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less less', 'less little'?
Suggestion: less less; less little
...ay be they think that number of viewers less less on this television as compare to other ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Restoring
...sion as compare to other television. restoring the devoted time to weather and local n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 55.5748502994 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 16.3942115768 6% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 2260.96107784 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 441.139720559 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29017857143 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61132477106 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 204.123752495 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549107142857 0.468620217663 117% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 705.55239521 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 22.8473053892 245% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.06727658 57.8364921388 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.25 119.503703932 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 23.324526521 240% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.70786347227 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234225774922 0.218282227539 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141805463853 0.0743258471296 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568109061648 0.0701772020484 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160746212169 0.128457276422 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553488145789 0.0628817314937 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 14.3799401198 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 48.3550499002 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 12.197005988 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.5979740519 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.32208582834 122% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 98.500998004 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 12.3882235529 222% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 11.1389221557 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.