Do you prefer to have one friend or a larger number or friends?

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Do you prefer to have one friend or a larger number or friends?

Personally,friends are often one of the most important people in our life. they are the tiny precious detail which makes us feel free and understood in the society. If you have them you are rich.

Friends are like family and as we know every family is quite different.

Same families are bigger than other. But in general we always love them

Firstly,I prefer to spend time with a small group of friends instead of large group of them,because the small circle of friends means better and close orientated to you friends , of course its easier to go out with that group and to schedule the meetings on time

I do not have many friends but for me they are the family I choose.

They know every small detail of my personality and I feel comfortable in my skin while Im with them.Also they are supportive when I have issues to be done.They give me advice when it needs to and when its not, because they care about me.And to take care for someone closer to you is that what divide him from the strangers ,and I don’t see them every day but I feel them - they are with me always – In my heart, that’s why I never feel lonely .

What is more for me why I support small group of friends is that I like to travel with couple of friends because its easier for all of us.

We find hotels easy and its easy to do sightseeing with them,because the decisions made by small company often are similar one to another.

I can travel more often with them.

I love my friends and they are always there when I need them.

Iam the person who I am today because of them.We have had so unforgettable memories and I am sure the best is yet to come.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, i feel, in general, of course, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37662337662 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40764524311 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50974025974 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.895712306 48.9658058833 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238979852997 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10051522703 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919293168522 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10992025507 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886716021555 0.0645574589148 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.