It is better for college students to live far away from home than living at home with their parents. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Moving towards the 21st century, many people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about college students should live with their parents or living their own. In fact, there are some who hold firmly to their belief that living far away from home has a great contribution to college students. However, others argue convincingly that independence from their parents brings some negative ways when they studying at university. Therefore, some arguments both for and against this issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two main points for people to defend the former argument. First of all, it is a well-documented fact that students can be responsible for their life. The most obvious example to prove is that in Europe countries, parents encourage their children to go out and living on their own when they reach out of eighteen years old. They must earn money to pay for the bills and have to decide their life. This helps them become more mature. Furthermore, there is no doubt that they should stay away from home and experience many challenges that they have never met before. For instance, they would have chances to built interpersonal relationships when living without parents. These social relationships could help students in their future careers later, as well as teach them how to communicate effectively and take care of their surroundings.
On the other hand, there are two primary pieces of evidence for people to support the latter argument. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that when their children live with parents then the family relationships are tight, especially between parents and their children. A clear example to prove is that in Asia countries, such as Vietnam, parents consider the family relationship is an important element in life. They want their children to live with them when they become adults in traditional culture in Vietnam, should protect and decide for the future of the children. Equally important, there is no denying that living and studying far away from home can be difficult for their children. This is supported by the fact that in Vietnam, parents always worry about their children, they can catch sickness or face various issues in their lives that they have never met before while they live far away home. Therefore, parents should live with their children in a crucial time of life.
All things are considered, it is my strong belief that college students should live far away from home. Accordingly, I strongly believe the role of living with parents in children’s development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 582, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
... decide for the future of the children. Equally important, there is no denying that liv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in fact, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11737089202 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63624534212 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492957746479 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7892889531 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.80952381 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.80952380952 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354882721825 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121205865284 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876783363119 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265639592408 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045928935373 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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