You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shopping center has cheap second-hand furniture. Write to the shop owner. In your letter•Describe what you need•Ask whether they have these items•Wha

Dear Sir / Madam,

One of my friends has recommended your store for shoestring budget furniture. I am writing this letter to request information about a few households I would like to purchase.

Of late, I moved into a new flat which does not have any appliances. I have been looking for not only furniture but also electronic equipments. I would like to buy a plethora of items such as a king-size bed, a couch, a reading table, four chairs, a bookshelf and a wooden wardrobe for my clothes. In addition to this, if you could sell me a micro woven and a television set that would be helpful. I prefer to own only six-month-old items.

Could you please let me know all the listed products are readily available or not. If yes, I would like to place an order.

Furthermore, could you please send me both cumulative and individual product invoice? I would really appreciate it if you could offer me a referral bonus.

I look forward to your response.

Yours faithfully,
Sudheerkumar Motakatla

Votes
Average: 6.4 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, really, so, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81609195402 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88132622525 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701149425287 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0275399244 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4615384615 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3846153846 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151635435872 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496494047358 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230623219312 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637545900342 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337076696752 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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