You stayed at your friend’s house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in the room you stayed in.
Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? I am writing this letter to inform you that I have left some important documents when I was staying at your place in Australia.
I visited Australia for attending two days business seminar on Customer Marketing and Advertising” as it would ai me in enhancing my knowledge and skills. I was really grateful that you allowed me to stay at your house. I had a lot of fun with you and your family and you were a great host.
When I arrive at my office on 29th September, I realized that I had left some critical documents in the room I stayed in, perhaps in the drawer on the left side of the bed. They were placed in a blue file with the name Prabhpreet Kaur printed on the top of the file. Those official papers are very critical as they contain confidential and sensitive data of the company
I would request you to kindly return the file through the post as soon as possible and please do share the delivery number so that I can keep a track of the package.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Take care and see you soon.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e in enhancing my knowledge and skills. I was really grateful that you allowed me...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t you allowed me to stay at your house. I had a lot of fun with you and your fami...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41062801932 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49806571767 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599033816425 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9750325242 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475301601867 0.216113520407 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166671021635 0.0766984524023 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923802165911 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242183015991 0.12726935374 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101256338087 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.