You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
Explain why you are selling the television
Describe the television
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear friend,
I hope this mail finds you well.
Recently we have purchased Apple TV which costs around 450 dollars and I writing to you know about that, again we got the same TV as a gift from one of my friends, as we recently celebrated our second son's birthday. So I planned to put this TV to an advertisement for selling into some commercial website(Olx). Abruptly, I got something in my mind, last month we both were looking for TV which should have an internet facility.
So I would like to suggest you should purchase at the same price because we didn't open the box yet and it includes a battery bag, remote pouch, internet dongle, and Amazon voucher. In addition to that, it is a 55-inch display with standing needles, so I believe that you don't need any fitter to work on this fixing into the wall.
If you want to look at the product, next week eveing 4 O Clock would be feasible. Because I have a doctor's appointment on the same day. If you have any further inquiries on this product call 6526958258 number. We would discuss over the call if possible.
yours lovingly,
Abc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...e TV which costs around 450 dollars and I writing to you know about that, again w...
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Line 9, column 77, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...d purchase at the same price because we didnt open the box yet and it includes a batt...
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Line 9, column 272, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...standing needles, so I believe that you dont need any fitter to work on this fixing ...
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Line 9, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to work on this fixing into the wall. If you want to look at the product, next...
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Line 11, column 58, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Clock' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'clocks', 'clox'.
Suggestion: Clocks; Clox
...ok at the product, next week eveing 4 O Clock would be feasible. Because I have a doc...
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Line 11, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eek eveing 4 O Clock would be feasible. Because I have a doctors appointment on the sam...
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Line 11, column 100, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...ock would be feasible. Because I have a doctors appointment on the same day. If you hav...
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Line 11, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a doctors appointment on the same day. If you have any further inquiries on this ...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...discuss over the call if possible. yours lovingly, Abc
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, well, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52763819095 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46791486333 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653266331658 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3615122808 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9090909091 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166704151907 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678643311857 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615333723478 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081100242562 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197925745883 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.