Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teams'' or 'team's'?
Suggestion: teams'; team's
...layers. One day in the street I saw the teams capitan, I asked him to have a picture ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 727, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...y, his life was in danger and there was no any a safeguard! Another noteworthy p...
^^
Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a people' or simply 'peoples'?
Suggestion: a people; peoples
...ople says that these famous persons use a peoples taxs and they have a huge duty in front...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 253, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e, there are also some disadvantages in this phenomena, but I believe the posibility...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, even so, for instance, i feel, i think, in summary, of course, as a result, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63424947146 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67684336344 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524312896406 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5162970872 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6363636364 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.40909090909 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176490230711 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445713562209 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539959740755 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967868953055 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191868595775 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.